邮件

Dear Chris
How are everything with you?I am very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese sports,I am writing to tell you that my favorite Chinese sports is kong fu
There are mainly three reasonsn the one hand,It helps me find confidence.On the other hand,It taught me how to protect myself.Last but not least,It help me promote persoal growth and experience enrichmentin my live.I hope some reasons can help you
I look forward to hearing from you
best regards
liling

评分：18分（第三档）

总体印象：
该作文基本完成了试题规定的任务。文中提及了关键内容要点，语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求。然而，存在一些语言错误，如标点、拼写和语法上，这些错误虽然不影响理解，但仍需改进。

存在的语法错误和修改建议：

1. "How are everything with you?"
   - 修改为 "How is everything with you?"

2. "I am very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese sports,I am writing to tell you that my favorite Chinese sports is kong fu"
   - 修改为 "I am very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese sports. I am writing to tell you that my favorite Chinese sport is kung fu."

3. "There are mainly three reasonsn the one hand,It helps me find confidence."
   - 修改为 "There are mainly three reasons: On the one hand, it helps me find confidence."

4. "On the other hand,It taught me how to protect myself."
   - 修改为 "On the other hand, it teaches me how to protect myself."

5. "Last but not least,It help me promote persoal growth and experience enrichmentin my live."
   - 修改为 "Last but not least, it helps me promote personal growth and enrich my life experience."

6. "I hope some reasons can help you"
   - 修改为 "I hope these reasons can help you."

7. "best regards"
   - 修改为 "Best regards,"

8. "liling"
   - 修改为 "Liling"

修改后的邮件：

Dear Chris,

How is everything with you? I am very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese sports. I am writing to tell you that my favorite Chinese sport is kung fu.

There are mainly three reasons: On the one hand, it helps me find confidence. On the other hand, it teaches me how to protect myself. Last but not least, it helps me promote personal growth and enrich my life experience. I hope these reasons can help you.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Liling