Community Library

                     Community Library
It is well known community library is very important in our lives.First of all,community library make us get to kown the world and help us with studies.In addition,community library help us to get information and knowledge.
Community library have many good servicen the one hand,community library imporves make friends of way,on the other hand,community library improves free reading environment,last but not least,community library is every convenient in rent books aspect.
In a word,community library is very important,helpful and absolutely necessary.

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1. **Grammar and Structure Errors:**
   - In the first sentence, "It is well known community library is very important in our lives," there should be an article before "community library." It should be "the community library" or "a community library."
   - The verb form should agree with its subject. Instead of "community library make us get to kown the world," it should be "community libraries make us get to know the world."
   - "Kown" is a spelling mistake and should be corrected to "know."
   - "Community library have many good service" should be "Community libraries have many good services."
   - Instead of "improves make friends of way," consider rephrasing for clarity. Perhaps, "improves the way we make friends" would be clearer.
   - "Every convenient in rent books aspect" is awkward. A clearer phrasing might be "very convenient for renting books."

2. **Revised Version:**
   Community libraries are well known as being very important in our lives. First of all, community libraries help us get to know the world and assist us with our studies. In addition, they provide us with information and knowledge.

   Community libraries offer many good services: on one hand, they improve the way we make friends; on the other hand, they offer a conducive environment for free reading. Last but not least, they are very convenient for renting books.

   In a word, community libraries are very important, helpful, and absolutely necessary.

3. **Score:**
   Given the errors and corrections listed above, this submission falls into the third category with a score range of 13-18 points. The writer has mentioned key points about the importance and benefits of community libraries, but there are multiple grammatical errors that need correction. I would assign a score of **15/30**.

陶果果 发表于 2024-10-22 23:48
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1. **Grammar and Structure E ...

麻烦能用中文指导吗？

莫无言 发表于 2024-10-22 23:49
麻烦能用中文指导吗？

当然可以。以下是对作文的批改和建议：

1. **语法和结构错误：**
   - 在第一句中，“It is well known community library is very important in our lives”缺少冠词。应为“the community library”或“a community library”。
   - 动词形式应与主语一致。“community library make us get to kown the world”应为“community libraries make us get to know the world”。
   - “Kown”是拼写错误，应改为“know”。
   - “Community library have many good service”应为“Community libraries have many good services”。注意名词和动词的单复数形式。
   - “Improves make friends of way”表述不清晰，可以改为“improves the way we make friends”以使其更清晰。
   - “Every convenient in rent books aspect”措辞不当，可以改为“very convenient for renting books”。

2. **修改后的版本：**
   社区图书馆在人们的生活中是非常重要的。首先，社区图书馆帮助我们了解世界，并支持我们的学习。此外，它们为我们提供信息和知识。

   社区图书馆提供许多良好的服务：一方面，它们改善了我们结交朋友的方式；另一方面，它们提供了一个良好的免费阅读环境。最后但同样重要的是，它们在借书方面非常方便。

   总之，社区图书馆非常重要，有益且绝对必要。

3. **评分：**
   考虑到以上列出的错误和纠正，这篇作文属于第三档次，分数范围为13-18分。作者提到了社区图书馆的重要性和好处的关键点，但存在多个语法错误需要纠正。建议评分为**15/30**。