Healthy life

  Nowdays, the issue of a healthy lifestyle has druwn public attention, especially the old . When it comes to a healthy lifertyle, people's opinions are same, They hold the belief that a healthg lifetyle is vital. I agree with it and I have a healthg lifestyle. Here are some suggestion on how to keep healthy.
  In the first place, we must have a good rest. It's important for us to have enough sleep. I always go to bed early. Besides, playing sports is good for our health. Finally, a positive attitude to life is beneficial. I often relax myself by reading books and listening to music.
  In a word, my healthy life includes having good sleep, doing exercise and having a good mood. If you follow these, I beli you will be healthier.

### 批改及评分：

### 总评：
这篇文章大体上完成了写作任务，表达了一些关于健康生活的看法。论点较为清晰，但在语法和拼写上存在一些错误，需要修改。

### 批改内容：

**第一段：**

1. "Nowdays" 应为 "Nowadays"。
2. "has druwn public attention" 应为 "has drawn public attention"。
3. "the old" 建议改为 "the elderly" 更为正式。
4. "lifertyle" 应为 "lifestyle"。
5. "people's opinions are same" 应为 "people's opinions are the same"。
6. "They hold the belief that a healthg lifetyle is vital." 应为 "They hold the belief that a healthy lifestyle is vital."
7. "I agree with it and I have a healthg lifestyle." 应为 "I agree with this view and I maintain a healthy lifestyle."

**修改后的第一段：**
"Nowadays, the issue of a healthy lifestyle has drawn public attention, especially among the elderly. When it comes to a healthy lifestyle, people's opinions are the same. They hold the belief that a healthy lifestyle is vital. I agree with this view and I maintain a healthy lifestyle."

**第二段：**

1. "suggestion" 应为复数形式 "suggestions"。
2. "we must have a good rest" 可以更自然地表述为 "we must ensure adequate rest"。
3. "I always go to bed early." 建议前面加上衔接词 "For example,"。
4. "playing sports" 可以更明确地表述为 "engaging in physical activities"。
5. "Finally, a positive attitude to life is beneficial." 建议改为 "Finally, maintaining a positive attitude towards life is beneficial."
6. "I often relax myself by" 可以简化为 "I often relax by"。

**修改后的第二段：**
"In the first place, we must ensure adequate rest. It's important for us to have enough sleep. For example, I always go to bed early. Besides, engaging in physical activities is good for our health. Finally, maintaining a positive attitude towards life is beneficial. I often relax by reading books and listening to music."

**第三段：**

1. "doing exercise" 可以更自然地表述为 "exercising"。
2. "I beli" 应为 "I believe"。

**修改后的第三段：**
"In a word, my healthy life includes having good sleep, exercising, and maintaining a good mood. If you follow these, I believe you will be healthier."

### 评分：
根据评分标准，这篇作文表达了主要内容，但存在一些拼写和语法错误，语言运用基本正确，不影响理解。属于第二档次。

得分：20分