My favourite job

It well known that wroking is very important  to our lives.In fact,no one can without the work.As for me,my favourite job is being a teacher.These is  reasons.first,being a techer can help me underested the world. Second,being a teacher is very inportant and meanning.Third,if I being a teacher I can help more people and stduents.I can do my best for this beautiful world.As a result,my favourite job is a teacher.

My favourite job

It is well known that working is very important to our lives. In fact, no one can live without work. As for me, my favourite job is being a teacher. There are several reasons. First, being a teacher can help me understand the world. Second, being a teacher is very important and meaningful. Third, if I were a teacher, I could help more people and students. I could do my best for this beautiful world. As a result, my favourite job is being a teacher.


评分：

这篇作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，但是存在一些语法错误和拼写错误。总体来看，文章结构较为清晰，但用词和句子结构比较单调。

具体问题如下：
1. "It well known" 应该改为 "It is well known"
2. "wroking" 拼写错误，应改为 "working"
3. "no one can without the work." 句子不完整，应改为 "no one can live without work."
4. "These is reasons." 存在语法错误，应改为 "There are several reasons."
5. "underested" 拼写错误，应改为 "understand"
6. "inportant" 和 "meanning" 拼写错误，应改为 "important" 和 "meaningful"
7. "I being" 应改为 "if I were"
8. "stduents" 拼写错误，应改为 "students"
9. "my favourite job is a teacher" 应改为 "my favourite job is being a teacher"

根据评分标准，本文属于第三档（13-18分）。文章基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了关键内容要点，但存在多处拼写和语法错误，影响了部分理解。

评分：16分