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An Email to an American Friend Joker
Dear Joker
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Xuzhou in November. You come to tell me the same day, I will go to the airport to meet you, arrange a good hotel for you, and then take you to play and eat Xuzhou snacks. Yunlong Mountain and Yunlong Lake is a must place, you can climb mountains and visit the lake, of course, Yunlong Mountain is not too high, Yunlong Lake is very beautiful. The Po Lin Monastery is also worth visiting. To Xuzhou must eat barbecue, this is our Xuzhou characteristics, as well as the pot chicken and pork, is also the characteristics of Xuzhou, there are many, many fun, Delicious, when you arrive, I'll be the tour guide, you'll like it here.
In addition, the recent cooling of the weather, we must pay attention to protection, wear more clothes.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Your friend Snow

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