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                My Favorite Chinese Festival
     In China, have a lot of traditional festival. As far as I am concerned, my favorite festival is the Spring festival. There are several reasons.
     First of all, in that day, I will wear new clothes and beautiful shoes. Means of new start it. Besides , I can eat special and only this dary food. For example, dumplings. Finally , I will visit my friends and relatives.  After , family members maybe give me belong to new year money . Our family members get together have a meal. Also, we ar talk about something in the past year that say goodbye. We make our plans for the future.
     This is my favorite Chinese Festival. How about you?

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我最喜欢的中国节日

在中国，有很多传统节日。就我而言，我最喜欢的节日是春节。原因有几个。

首先，在那一天，我会穿上新衣服和漂亮的鞋子。这意味着新的开始。此外，我可以吃特别的，只有这一天才有的食物。例如，饺子。最后，我会拜访我的朋友和亲戚。然后，家人也许会给我压岁钱。我们全家人聚在一起吃饭。同时，我们会谈论过去一年的事情，告别旧年。我们会制定未来的计划。

这就是我最喜欢的中国节日。你呢？