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My Dream Trip

  The place that i want to visit most is weihai because it is one of the most attractive tourist places in China.It is full of historical buildings and delicious food. It's wonderful to see all kinds of buildings on both sides of the road.

Ocean park is the place i prefer to go.There are so many kinds of fishes.We can also see the show of dolphins there.I have seen many photos of Ocean park online, so I want to take a look.

  There are also many famous local food in weihai, such as seafood. I think it is very delicious and I want to bring some to my friends on my next visit.

  In a word, Weihai is a beautiful city, and I am looking forward to the opportunity to travel to Weihai.

梦想之旅
我最想去的地方是威海，因为它是中国最具吸引力的旅游胜地之一。这里充满了历史建筑和美味的食物。沿着道路两旁看到各种建筑真是太棒了。我更喜欢去海洋公园。那里有许多种类的鱼类，还可以观看海豚表演。我在网上看过许多海洋公园的照片，所以我想亲自去看看。威海还有很多著名的本地美食，比如海鲜。我认为它们非常美味，下次去的时候想给朋友们带一些。总之，威海是一个美丽的城市，我期待有机会能去旅行威海。