Low-carbon life

                          Low-carbon life
It is well kown that low-carbon life is very important.Hare are benifits,first of all,low-carbon life can help our improve environment.In addition,low-carbon life can help  exercise our bodies.In the end,low-carbon life can help our relax
Hare are things we should to do.On the one hand,people should choose public transportation to reduce resource waste and environmental pollution.On the other hand,the government should make some laws  toprotect our resource.last but not least,the government shut down heavry-polluting factories to reduce environment pollution.
In a word,I believe that only when we work together can we expect to have a better future

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作文总体上基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了低碳生活的重要性和一些具体措施。然而在结构和语言运用方面有一些问题。

语法错误与修改建议：

1. "It is well kown" 应为 "It is well known"。拼写错误。

2. "Hare are benifits" 应为 "Here are the benefits"。拼写错误。

3. "can help our improve environment" 应为 "can help improve our environment"。使用了多余的代词“our”。

4. "can help exercise our bodies" 应为 "can help us exercise our bodies"。缺少宾语“us”。

5. "help our relax" 应为 "help us relax"。同样缺少宾语“us”。

6. "Hare are things we should to do" 应为 "Here are things we should do"。拼写错误且误用“to”。

7. "toreduce" 应为 "to protect"。需要空格。

8. "resource.last" 应为 "resources. Last"。句子之间需要空格和首字母大写。

9. "shut down heavry-polluting" 应为 "shut down heavily-polluting"。拼写错误。

整体来看，本文提到了低碳生活的好处和建议措施，但存在多处拼写和语法错误，需要改善语言的准确性。此外，可以通过增加具体细节来增强论述的深度和说服力。