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Books are very important for us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and experience. As a matter of fact, no one can live without books. Some people like e-books and some people like paper books. In my case, I prefer paper books more, although I also have e-books. Here are some reasons. Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I have the habit of turning pages. Secondly, when reading paper books, I can write notes in them as I read. Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories as they have memorable value. In conclusion, I prefer paper books.

### 评分与评语

**总分：28分（第一档）**

**评语：**

这篇作文清楚地表达了关键内容要点，并且结构合理，语言运用较为准确、恰当。尽管有个别小错误，但不影响整体理解。本文的内容要点包括对纸质书和电子书的偏好、多个支持理由以及结论，逻辑清晰。

### 语法错误及修改：

1. **原文：**
   > Books are very important for us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and experience.

   **修改：**
   > Books are very important to us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and providing us with experience.

   **原因：**
   介词使用错误，"important to us" 比 "important for us" 更符合习惯表达。而且，"providing us with experience" 比 "teaching us experience" 更具逻辑性，因为经验是通过提供而不是教授获得的。

2. **原文：**
   > As a matter of fact, no one can live without books.

   **修改：**
   > In fact, no one can live without books.

   **原因：**
   "In fact" 更简洁，更常用。

3. **原文：**
   > Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I have the habit of turning pages.

   **修改：**
   > Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I enjoy the habit of turning pages.

   **原因：**
   "I enjoy the habit of turning pages" 比 "I have the habit of turning pages" 更自然，并且更能传达积极的偏好。

4. **原文：**
   > Secondly, when reading paper books, I can write notes in them as I read.

   **修改：**
   > Secondly, when reading paper books, I can take notes directly on the pages.

   **原因：**
   "take notes directly on the pages" 更明确具体。

5. **原文：**
   > Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories as they have memorable value.

   **修改：**
   > Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories as they have sentimental value.

   **原因：**
   "sentimental value" 是更常见的表达，意思是具有情感价值。

6. **原文：**
   > In conclusion, I prefer paper books.

   **修改：**
   > In conclusion, I prefer paper books over e-books.

   **原因：**
   明确比较对象，使表述更加清晰。

结合改后的版本：

**Revised Version:**

Books are very important to us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and providing us with experience. In fact, no one can live without books. Some people like e-books and some people like paper books. In my case, I prefer paper books more, although I also have e-books. Here are some reasons. Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I enjoy the habit of turning pages. Secondly, when reading paper books, I can take notes directly on the pages. Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories as they have sentimental value. In conclusion, I prefer paper books over e-books.