E-Books or Paper books

Books are very important for us in many ways, such as it can teach our knowledge and experience. As a matter of fact,no one can live without books. Some peole like E-books and some people like Paper books.In my case,I like Paper books more,although I have E-books too.Here are some reasons. First,paper books can make me feel comfortble because I have Book-turning habit.Second,read paper books can write read notes in time. Third,Paper books can stay memory.It have memorable value. In conclusion, I like Paper books.

**评分：13分**

**评语：**

这篇作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了关键内容要点，但存在一些语言错误和拼写错误，影响了整体表达。语言结构简单，需改进。以下是具体的语法错误及修改意见。

**语法错误及修改：**

1. **句子：**
   - 原文：Books are very important for us in many ways, such as it can teach our knowledge and experience.
   - 修改：Books are very important for us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and experience.

2. **句子：**
   - 原文：As a matter of fact,no one can live without books.
   - 修改：As a matter of fact, no one can live without books.

3. **句子：**
   - 原文：Some peole like E-books and some people like Paper books.In my case,I like Paper books more,although I have E-books too.
   - 修改：Some people like e-books and some people like paper books. In my case, I like paper books more, although I also have e-books.

4. **句子：**
   - 原文：First,paper books can make me feel comfortble because I have Book-turning habit.
   - 修改：Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I have the habit of turning pages.

5. **句子：**
   - 原文：Second,read paper books can write read notes in time.
   - 修改：Secondly, when reading paper books, I can write notes in them as I read.

6. **句子：**
   - 原文：Third,Paper books can stay memory.It have memorable value.
   - 修改：Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories. They have memorable value.

7. **句子：**
   - 原文：In conclusion, I like Paper books.
   - 修改：In conclusion, I prefer paper books.

**改进建议：**

1. **扩大词汇量**：
   尝试使用更多的高级词汇，以增加作文的丰富性。

2. **加强语法练习**：
   注意主谓一致、时态和冠词的正确使用，避免基本语法错误。

3. **逻辑连接词**：
   使用更多的逻辑连接词（如“furthermore”、“moreover”）增强文章的连贯性。

4. **段落结构**：
   尝试将每个理由分别成段，提升文章的整体结构和清晰度。

综上所述，这篇作文需要在语法、词汇和结构上有所改进，建议进一步修改和完善以提高分数。