Let's save water

With the rapid development of the national economy , a large number of environmental problems have appeared at the same time .One of the headaches is water pollution. In the past, all kinds of sewage were poured into the water, which destroyed the water resources and affected peoples life.
As time goes by, we realize the importance of protecting water resources. Firstly, the government has made laws on water pollution. Secondly, to explain to people the harm caused by not protecting water resources. Finally, protecting water resources is everyones responsibility.
Lets take action immediately .

### 批改与评分

这篇作文大致完成了题目“Let's save water”的任务，表达了部分要点，但有一些语法和语言运用上的错误，以及部分内容略显单调。根据评分标准，初步判断为第三档，即13-18分。

#### 语法错误与修改：

1. **原句：With the rapid development of the national economy , a large number of environmental problems have appeared at the same time .**
   - **修改后：With the rapid development of the national economy, numerous environmental problems have emerged simultaneously.**

2. **原句：One of the headaches is water pollution.**
   - **修改后：One major issue is water pollution.**
   
3. **原句：In the past, all kinds of sewage were poured into the water, which destroyed the water resources and affected peoples life.**
   - **修改后：In the past, various types of sewage were discharged into water bodies, destroying water resources and affecting people's lives.**
   
4. **原句：As time goes by, we realize the importance of protecting water resources.**
   - **修改后：As time goes by, we have come to realize the importance of protecting water resources.**
   
5. **原句：Firstly, the government has made laws on water pollution.**
   - **修改后：Firstly, the government has enacted laws to combat water pollution.**

6. **原句：Secondly, to explain to people the harm caused by not protecting water resources.**
   - **修改后：Secondly, it is essential to educate people about the harms caused by not protecting water resources.**
   
7. **原句：Finally, protecting water resources is everyones responsibility.**
   - **修改后：Finally, protecting water resources is everyone's responsibility.**（需注意缩写形式的撇号）

8. **原句：Lets take action immediately .**
   - **修改后：Let's take action immediately.**（同样需注意缩写形式的撇号）

#### 综合评价：

- **内容要点**：文章提到了水污染的问题，以及政府、公众在保护水资源方面所做的努力。
- **篇章结构**：基本清楚，有开头、中间的原因分析以及结尾的呼吁。可以进一步扩展内容，使其更加丰富。
- **语言运用**：基本能达到任务要求，但存在一些语法和拼写错误，需要改进。

#### 最终评分：
因上述因素，建议评分为17分，属于第三档的上半区。