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education online ore offline.
People often argue which is better : education online or offline. Some like education online because the study time is more flexible. But I prefer education offline.       
First, education ofline can talk to the teacher face to face. If I have any questions, the teacher can answer them in time.Second, enducation offline can be discuessed with classmates. I can share with them the ways and experiences of the doring the problems. The kind of learning environment is very good and helps me acquire more knowledge.
Accordingly, even though education online has its advantage. I still prefer education offline. It can give me a better learning evironment and study more

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