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Nowadays, our daily life is closely connected with modem technology. No one can live without some basic domestic appliances or devices, such as TV, cellphone, fridge or camera. For me, the most two important devices in my home are the laptop and the washing machine.

With the help of laptop, I can acquire the newest information through the Internet. I can talk with my family members or friends no matter how far they are. I can pay bills through e-bank. Besides, I can also deal with my official work at home. You can't image my life without computers.

Another device I need in my life is, of course, the washing machine. I am that girl who loves changing clothes frequently, therefore, washing machine can save time and protect my skin. What I need to do is to press the button and wait and hang the clothes.

Without PC, you would know nothing about the modem society. Without washing machine, you would waste your time doing the washing day after day.

现在，我们的日常生活与现代技术密切相关。没有人可以没有一些基本的家用电器或设备，比如电视、手机、冰箱或照相机。对我来说，在家最重要的两个设备是笔记本电脑和洗衣机。

有了笔记本电脑的帮助，我可以通过互联网获取最新的信息。无论家人或朋友离我有多远，我都可以与他们进行交流。我可以通过电子银行支付账单。此外，我还可以在家处理我的工作事务。你无法想象没有电脑的生活是什么样的。

另一个我在生活中需要的设备当然就是洗衣机了。我是一个喜欢经常换衣服的女孩，因此洗衣机可以节省时间并保护我的皮肤。我需要做的就是按下按钮等待并晾晒衣服。如果没有洗衣机，你将会浪费大量时间每天都去洗衣服。

总之，现代社会，没有个人电脑，你将一无所知。没有洗衣机，你将浪费时间天天洗衣服。