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                        Fight against haze
       With the repaid development of technology, Many machines  and travel tools form haze to pollute environment. It is bad to human.
        When it comes to haze, It is harm people physically and mentally.Also can pollute top level air.In addition, more travel tools  are increase haze. Lead to environment pollution.
         For the above harm.As far us  i'm concerned, We can use green travel and wear mask outside.Avoid to harm  caused by haze. Protect environment is the most
important part.Let's us fighting against haze together.
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Fight against Haze

With the rapid development of technology, many machines and transportation tools contribute to haze and environmental pollution. This has adverse effects on human health.

When it comes to haze, it not only poses physical and mental risks to people but also contaminates the atmosphere at high levels. Moreover, the increasing number of transportation tools further worsens the haze situation, leading to environmental degradation.

Considering the aforementioned harms, in my opinion, we can adopt environmentally-friendly means of travel and wear masks when being outdoors to minimize the damage caused by haze. Protecting the environment is of utmost importance. Let us join hands in the fight against haze.

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