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My Hobby

Everyone has their own hobbies, some people like cycling, some people like running and so on, while I like mountaineering best.

Whenever I have free time, I will climb the mountain, maybe with friends, maybe by myself, I like to climb mountains everywhere. In the process of mountaineering, I can meet all kinds of people. I deem that communicating with different people is interesting,which can broaden my horizon.At the same time, I can also learn a lot of knowledge from it.

In a word, I really enjoy climbing and enjoy the feeling of relaxation when i  climb mountains. I will keep this hobby forever.So what are your hobbies?

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我的爱好

每个人都有自己的爱好，有些人喜欢骑车，有些人喜欢跑步，而我最喜欢的是登山。每当我有空闲时间，我就会去爬山，可能和朋友一起，也可能独自一人，我喜欢在各个地方登山。在登山过程中，我可以遇到各种各样的人。我认为与不同的人交流很有趣，可以拓宽我的视野。同时，我也可以从中学到很多知识。总而言之，我真的很喜欢爬山，并享受在爬山时放松的感觉。我会一直保持这个爱好。那你的爱好是什么呢？

My Hobby

Everyone has their own hobbies. Some people like cycling, some people like running, and I like mountaineering the most. Whenever I have free time, I climb mountains, sometimes with friends, sometimes by myself. I enjoy climbing mountains everywhere. During the process of mountaineering, I can meet all kinds of people. I find it interesting to communicate with different people, which broadens my horizon. At the same time, I can also learn a lot of knowledge from it. In short, I really enjoy climbing and the feeling of relaxation it brings. I will keep this hobby forever. So, what are your hobbies?