Community Library

                 Community Library
It is well known the community library is every important in our lives.First of all,community libraries can help us get to know the world and help us with our studies.In addition,community libraries can help us to get information and kownledge.
Community libraries have many good servicen the one hand,they improves good way make friends,on the other hand,they offers good reading environment,last but not least,they offers free way renting books.
In a word,the community library is important,helpful and absolutely necessary.

评分：18分（第三档）

**分析：**

内容要点：文章提及了社区图书馆的重要性及其服务，基本完成了任务，但存在一些语言问题。

篇章结构：文章结构较为简单，但能够传达出主要观点。

语言运用：使用的语法结构和词汇基本满足最低要求，但存在一些语法错误和拼写错误，这些错误在一定程度上影响了理解。

**存在的问题与修改建议：**

1.  **题目格式：**
   - “Community Library” 不需要重复。
   - 建议题目和正文之间可以加上一行空白行，以便区分。

2.  **拼写错误：**
   - "every" 应为 “very”。
   - “kownledge” 应为 “knowledge”。

3.  **语法及表达：**
   - "It is well known the community library is every important in our lives." 修改为: "It is well known that the community library is very important in our lives."
   - "community libraries can help us to get information and kownledge." 修改为: "community libraries can provide us with information and knowledge."
   - "community libraries have many good servicen the one hand,they improves good way make friends,on the other hand,they offers good reading environment,last but not least,they offers free way renting books." 修改为: "community libraries offer many good services: on the one hand, they improve the means to make friends; on the other hand, they provide a good reading environment; last but not least, they offer a free way to rent books."
   - "they improves" 应为 "they improve"。
   - "they offers" 应为 "they offer"。
   - “last but not least,they offers free way renting books.” 修改为: “last but not least, they offer a free way to rent books.”

4.  **标点符号：**
   - 在“service:”后面应该有空格。
   - 在“one hand,” 和“the other hand,” 后面应添加空格。

通过对这些语法错误和拼写错误的修改，文章将更清晰、更有效地传达作者的观点。