health live

             Eveyone intend to have a health life.As for me,I think heathy live is very meanning because however we do, we must have a health body.Here are some suggest how keep a heathy live.

   To begin with. We should have a good rest and at latest 11 o’clovk we go to bed.Furthermore.

We should develop a good eating habits and play sports every day.As the saying goes,An apple a day keeps a doctor away. Thirdly.We must have a positive attitudes.It is very important for us to keep good mind.

   Finally,I think have a health live is very important.I belive if you do that will more heathly.

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作文基本完成了任务，但存在明显的语法、拼写和语义错误，影响了理解。本文属于第四档次。

**错误及修改如下：**

1. "Eveyone intend to have a health life."
   - 修改为："Everyone intends to have a healthy life."

2. "As for me,I think heathy live is very meanning because however we do, we must have a health body."
   - 修改为："As for me, I think a healthy life is very meaningful because no matter what we do, we must have a healthy body."

3. "Here are some suggest how keep a heathy live."
   - 修改为："Here are some suggestions on how to maintain a healthy life."

4. "To begin with. We should have a good rest and at latest 11 o’clovk we go to bed."
   - 修改为："To begin with, we should have a good rest and go to bed by 11 o'clock at the latest."

5. "Furthermore.We should develop a good eating habits and play sports every day."
   - 修改为："Furthermore, we should develop good eating habits and exercise every day."

6. "As the saying goes,An apple a day keeps a doctor away."
   - 修改为："As the saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away."

7. "Thirdly.We must have a positive attitudes.It is very important for us to keep good mind."
   - 修改为："Thirdly, we must have a positive attitude. It is very important for us to maintain a good mindset."

8. "Finally,I think have a health live is very important.I belive if you do that will more heathly."
   - 修改为："Finally, I think having a healthy life is very important. I believe if you do that, you will be healthier."

**修改后的版本：**

Everyone intends to have a healthy life. As for me, I think a healthy life is very meaningful because no matter what we do, we must have a healthy body. Here are some suggestions on how to maintain a healthy life.

To begin with, we should have a good rest and go to bed by 11 o'clock at the latest. Furthermore, we should develop good eating habits and exercise every day. As the saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away. Thirdly, we must have a positive attitude. It is very important for us to maintain a good mindset.

Finally, I think having a healthy life is very important. I believe if you do that, you will be healthier.