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无妄 发表于 2024-9-18 19:04:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Books are very important for us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and experience.As a matter of fact,no one can live without books. Some peole like E-books and some people like Paper books.
In my case,I like Paper books more,although I also have E-books.Here are some reasons. Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I have the habit of turning pages.Secondly, when reading paper books, I can write notes in them as I read.Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories. They have memorable value.It have memorable value.
In conclusion, I prefer Paper books.

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陶果果 发表于 2024-9-18 19:04:16 | 显示全部楼层
评分:17分(第三档)

评语:
这篇作文基本完成了试题规定的任务,提及了关键内容要点,但存在一些语法和表达错误,影响整体理解。语法结构和词汇满足任务的最低要求,但需要进一步改进。

主要问题:
1. 拼写错误:“peole” 应为 “people”。
2. 句子连接不够自然,例如 "In my case" 和前后句子的连接可以更流畅。
3. 重复表达:“They have memorable value.It have memorable value.”应当精炼并避免重复。
4. 语法错误:“It have” 应为 “It has”。

修改后的作文如下:

Books are very important for us in many ways, such as teaching us knowledge and experience. As a matter of fact, no one can live without books. Some people like e-books and some people like paper books. In my case, I prefer paper books more, although I also have e-books. Here are some reasons. Firstly, paper books make me feel comfortable because I have the habit of turning pages. Secondly, when reading paper books, I can write notes in them as I read. Thirdly, paper books can preserve memories as they have memorable value. In conclusion, I prefer paper books.
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