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An Email to An England Friend  Li Yu
Dear Li Yu:
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Xuzhou in September
When you arrive, I'll pick you up at the high-speed train station.I'll book a hotel for you in advance
There are many beautiful lakes in Xuzhou, so Yunlong Lake is a must visit. I will also show you some historic parks.One of the most important things not to miss is to try the local cuisine--
barbecue.You can choose between spicy and non-spicy options.Of course, there are also many food and attractions that I am sure you will enjoy and have a happy time here.
In addition, pay attention to weather changes, take protective measures, I will be ready for you.
Looking forward to your arrive
                                                                 Yours
                                                             Zhao Hua

亲爱的李宇：

很高兴听到你九月份要来徐州的消息。当你到达时，我会在高铁站接你，并提前为你预订好酒店。

徐州有许多美丽的湖泊，云龙湖是一定要去的地方。我还会带你参观一些历史公园。其中最重要的一件事就是尝试当地的美食——烧烤。你可以选择辣和不辣的选项。当然，还有很多其他的食物和景点，我相信你在这里会过得很愉快。

另外，注意天气变化，采取防护措施，我会为你做好准备。

期待着你的到来。

此致

赵华