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An Email to An England friend  Li Yu
Dear Li Yu:
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Xuzhou in September
When you arrive, I'll pick you up at the high-speed train station.I'll book a hotel for you in advance
There are many beautiful lakes in Xuzhou, so Yunlong Lake is a must visit. I will also show you some historic parks.One of the most important things not to miss is to try the local cuisine--
barbecue.You can choose between spicy and non-spicy options.Of course, there are also many food and attractions that I am sure you will enjoy and have a happy time here.
In addition, pay attention to weather changes, take protective measures, I will be ready for you.
Looking forward to your arrive
                                                                 Yours
                                                             Zhao Hua

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An Email to An England friend  Li Yu
Dear Li Yu:
I ...

亲爱的李宇：

很高兴听到你将在九月来到徐州。当你到达时，我会去高铁站接你。我会提前为你预订一家酒店。

徐州有许多美丽的湖泊，所以云龙湖是一个必去的景点。我还会带你去一些历史公园。

最重要的是不要错过尝试当地的烤肉美食。你可以选择辣和不辣的选项。当然，这里还有很多美食和景点，我相信你会在这里度过愉快的时光。

另外，请留意天气变化，采取防护措施，我已经为你准备好了。

期待你的到来。

祝好，

赵华