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                        Fight against haze
       With the repaid development of technology, Many machines  and travel tools form haze to pollute environment. It is bad to human.
        When it comes to haze, It is harm people physically and mentally.Also can pollute top level air.In addition, more travel tools  are increase haze. Lead to environment pollution.
         For the above harm.As far us  i'm concerned, We can use green travel and wear mask outside.Avoid to harm  caused by haze. Protect environment is the most
important part.Let's us fighting against haze together.
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Fight against haze

With the rapid development of technology, many machines and transportation tools contribute to the formation of haze, which severely pollutes the environment and poses a great threat to humans.

When it comes to haze, it not only harms people physically and mentally, but also pollutes the atmosphere. Additionally, the increasing use of travel tools contributes to environmental pollution, resulting in more haze.

Considering the aforementioned dangers, we can make efforts to combat haze. The first step is to adopt green travel methods and wear masks when going outside, in order to minimize the harm caused by haze. Moreover, protecting the environment should be our top priority. Let's unite and fight against haze together.

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