业余时间的活动有哪些，描述其中一项

Reading
Out work,my favorist action is reading.when i read a book,a novel,a magazine,or a history book,iam very happy and very realise.in vari sorties,kinds of peple and their life,lofs of interviews in the whole world envn in the space,even in the fictful tale.
To read a book,its neccessery there is a quiet surrounding.this can make you entre the situation of book,and deepen it.while i havre finished the supper after a days work,i usually woud like to sit on the sofa,turn on the reading lamp nearby,then take up the book that i read,thé world is beacoming so beautifull.

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读书

在我的业余时间里，我最喜欢的活动之一就是阅读。当我读一本书、一部小说、一本杂志或者一本历史书时，我感到非常开心和充实。在各种故事、各种人物和他们的生活中，有很多采访报道，涉及全世界甚至太空，甚至还有虚构的故事。

阅读一本书需要一个安静的环境，这样你才能投入到书中，并深入其中。当我完成了一天的工作后晚饭后，我通常会坐在沙发上，打开旁边的阅读灯，然后拿起我正在读的书，世界变得如此美好。

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