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逢考必过 · 发表于 2023-10-9 00:19:15

Dear Tom,

Hope you have a greatday. I am writing about my voluntter job

There are different volunteerjob I did , such as free teaching and free drivng. When it comes to different volunteerjob I did, the majority

of people believe that they have their own benefits. Faced with differentvolunteer job I did, different people have different choices. On the one hand,some people like free teaching because it is more meaningful. On the otherhand, other people prefer free drivng because it is more enjoyable.

Everyone can choose whathe likes. As far as I am concerned, I like_ free teaching because it is moremeaningful. I hope you can enjoy it, as it is indeed good for us.

I look forward to hearingfrom (seeing) you.

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陶果果 · 发表于 2023-10-9 00:20:23

尊敬的Tom，

希望你有个愉快的一天。我正在写一篇关于我的志愿者工作的作文。我做过不同的志愿者工作，如免费教学和免费驾驶。谈到我做过的不同志愿者工作，大多数人认为它们都有各自的好处。面对不同的志愿者工作，不同的人做出了不同的选择。一方面，有些人喜欢免费教学，因为它更有意义。另一方面，其他人更喜欢免费驾驶，因为它更有乐趣。每个人都可以选择自己喜欢的。就我个人而言，我喜欢免费教学，因为它更有意义。希望你能享受它，因为它确实对我们有益。期待听到（见到）你。

以上作文经过批改如下：

Dear Tom,

Hope you have a great day. I am writing about my volunteer job. There have been various volunteer jobs that I have done, such as free teaching and free driving. When it comes to the different volunteer jobs I have done, the majority of people believe that they each have their own benefits. Faced with these different volunteer jobs, people make different choices. On the one hand, some people prefer free teaching because it is more meaningful. On the other hand, others prefer free driving because it is more enjoyable. Everyone can choose what they like. As for me, I prefer free teaching because it is more meaningful. I hope you can enjoy it too, as it truly benefits us. I look forward to hearing from (seeing) you.

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最好的祝愿，

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